Ok so i wrote this paper and i have NO idea what’s wrong with it next to the paragraph my teacher put a P for puncuation but i can’t see what is wrong with it! can you guys help me out? here are the paragraphs Thanks alot guys
How do we solve this problem? Easy get people educated on going green, tell them how they can save money. When going to the grocery store pick up one of those trendy shopping bags. For every bag that is being used three cents gets deducted off the bill.
2. instead of heating the house and the water with oil, why not heat it with pellet stoves and solar panels? My grandfather has both. he absolutely loves them. with the pellet stoves it is cheapter to buy the pellets every four months, rather than every three months filling up the oul tank for heat. Solar panels are also cheaper, they heat your water by extracting the sun, some solar panel companies give tax incentives for using solar panels because it is saving the planet one by one.
3.How about saving our paper? when throwing away paper it goes into the dumpster and it never gets reused again, by recycling the paper will get used again, therefor the tree will not get wasted.
4.( this one is for a comma splice) I myself is gulity for making this mistake because it saves as much as .00 to 0.00 on the electric bill, just imagine if everyone did this, we would be saving a ton of money and reduce the amount of engery.
5.The biggest part of saving our planet is saving the water supply. it is often taken for granted, but if we use these tips we may be able to save the water.
6. (this one is for comma splices it says i have 3 of them)
It is easy to get involved and it is easy to keep it up, the only problem is to keep the word out and keep it spreading, if we do not get this message out to people soon, there is going to be no earth for us all to live on. Then what? We have to take charge NOW! Let’s stop wasting water, let’s start recycling bottles, cans and paper. At work for why not go paperless for our pay stubs? We all can make a difference, it goes to show that the little things in life can make a big difference.